Our topic this term is land,Sea and Sky. Lately we have been doing things around our topic like writing about plants. Mrs P gave us a model to follow called blackbird. When we wrote the poem we had to describe a dead plant I chose a flower. This is my poem.
Kaia
Hi Kaia,
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I really liked the way you descibe the dead plant,
Maybe next time you could change size of your writing it was hard to see
Other than that it was really good
Keep it up
Please go on my blog
http://pcslucyk.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi lucy,
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Thanks for your coming and commenting on my blog I really apprieciate it. I have also changed the size of my writing.
Thanks Lucy
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