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Monday 22 August 2016

                   The worst nightmare ever                                           I could hear my heart beating so loud the moment I took a step of the plane a gust of wind blew and I could see someone running towards us he was running so fast I could see flashes when he ran as he came closer and closer I started to recognise his face it was Usain Bolt. He breathed heavily and then said to me do you know where the olympic stadium is? I replied, no just as I said no another gust of wind blew I said to myself in my head what is wrong with the wind. The wind suddenly blew me over and I fell to the floor I hit my head. I woke up in the hospital there was no nurses or doctors around so I silently tip toed out of the hospital. Bang there was a loud noise I ran and ran until I could not see the hospital the more I ran the more the sky got darker I was so scared the big noisy bang seemed to be following me. I was so scared I looked back and there were olympic 500 meter runners following me they kept on saying something like wake up but I wasn't sure that was what they were saying. I kept on running and I wouldn't dare look back to face the front at that second I tripped and fell into a giant hole and bam I actually woke up and I found out it was all just a nightmare I was actually at home in my bed and my mum was telling me to wake up to go to school. Yay another day at school with boring work.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      This week for writing we had to write narrative that had something                                                         to do with the Olympics this is mine.                                                                                                          Kaia

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kaia,

    Nice work, I like your writing.
    I could picture everything you said it felt like I was really there.
    I wrote a narrative too.
    Next time maybe check your punctuation.
    Kate

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